第1338期英文写作擂台赛[2012年2月12日]

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第1338期英文写作擂台赛[2012年2月12日]

TOPIC: Traveling by Train or by Plane
1. 我们出远门总要坐火车或飞机
2. 坐火车和坐飞机各有什么利弊
3. 你的结论如何

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wygpost

Traveling by train or by plane

     Nowadays train is the common communication vihecle. When the Spring Festival is coming, hundreds and thousands of people go home by train.  Some people go home by plane.

     They have their advantages and inadvantages. First it costs little by train relatively. It is fit for our salariat. But it takes more time than plane. The enviroment of train is bad relatively. Train is fit for short distance.

     So when we should choose the approriate vihecle fit for us. If you think you can affort the ticket of plane you can choose the plane. If you have an urgency you can choose plane too. Otherwise you can choose the train.

xx沉默

everyone want to travling ,but how many people can't ,in order to their family ,they had to leave their home to work .

lixiangmei12

travelling by train is safe and cost little money, but it take more time

happyflyzl

Traveling is part of our life and our work, Two common ways are by train and by plane. for me, I prefer the train.
Each style has its advantages and disadvantages.
For train, it's confortable, safe and in the most case, train station locates at the center of the city, so it has a better traffic situation.
For plan, it's fast, and has the beautiful attendant during the flight. But it's uncomfortable during the climbing and landing.
For me,I prefer the train for my life, but unfortunately, I have to choose plane for my work. I used to experience the exchange of two planes . It made me boring.

little·夭

Traveling by train or by plane
Many years ago, before the industry revolution, the horse is the fastest choice as a travel tool. With the development of technology and economic, the train has been invented to replace the horse. The appearance of the train have greatly improved the efficiency of our work and life, meantime, it also drove the development of society and technology. At last, the train did not satisfy the business or the society requirement, so, the plane was born. As the modern traffic tool, the train and the plane have become the prior selection for the long travel.
Although, both of the train and the plane offer us convenience for our life. But each of them has their own advantage and disadvantage. I want to compare the train and the plane to the slow food and the fast food. That is to say , the train is slower than the plane. Meantime, the train has more nutrition than the plane. In the journey, you could peacefully think your work and life, and you could peaceful enjoy the graceful view when you are on the train, this would give you some suddenly inspiration to your life. However, the plane could only give you more busy time for work and life, it could not offer you the short leisure. At last, I believe the train is safer than the plane. There are many plane incidents in the world while less of the train.
From the mentioned above could be seen, if I have more time for the journey, I would take the train rather than the plane. With the development of the society and the economic , people would focus on the quality of their life more and more, in the near future, I trust the train would be more popular as a attractive traffic tool.

吴洪岩

very very good

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yonghui1676

How can i get the answer !

quanyuwei

The world become more and more small with the development of science and technology, traveling is a vital part in modern life. When it comes to the issue that what is translation tool would you like to select: Plane or train? It is obviously that different people have different things, but personally I will make a advisable decision depend on vary situations.
The biggest will in the Spring Festival is back to home and get together with our family members. As a migrant worker in Shanghai have to choose a way to back my hometown. Train, cheaper but have lasted 24 hours; Plane, it can reach to destination at 2 hours but triple expensive than the train. Less expense or fast, only one thing you can have. Take the 2012 Spring festival for an example, I have selected by train back to hometown as a reason of the date was too close to the Chinese lunar new year day, plane ticket had rarely discount. But when I back to Shanghai, the crowded days have gone, so only one hundred more than train’s expense I could get a plane ticket.
So, in a word, choosing which tool is mostly depending on the practical situation. The basic rule is: as quick as possible on the premise of saving money.